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제목 Divided Korea 2 (revised version) 등록일 2021-05-27
내용 Knowing that Russia was going down, England supported Japan to stop Russia from spreading, and Japan went to war against Russia.
That is Japan-Russia war. Japan also wanted to expand their territory to the north.
Here, the important thing is that England agreed that Japan would colonize Korea. That is the first Anglo-Japanese Alliance, between Britain and Japan in 1902.
In 1905 Japan won Russia, and America also agreed to Japan to take control of Korea. <Katsura-Taft Agreement>
Finally, Korea became a colony of Japan in 1910.
담당강사 cynthia2usa 등록일 2021-05-27
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Well done!

 

Knowing that Russia was going down, England supported Japan to stop Russia from spreading, and Japan went to war against Russia.
That is the Japan-Russia war. Japan also wanted to expand its territory to the north.
Here, the important thing is that England agreed that Japan would colonize Korea. That is the first Anglo-Japanese Alliance between Britain and Japan in 1902.
In 1905 Japan won against Russia, and America also agreed to let Japan take control of Korea.
Finally, Korea became a colony of Japan in 1910.

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