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| 제목 | Divided Korea 3 (revised version) | 등록일 | 2021-05-27 |
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| 내용 | But 30 Years later, Japan went to World War 2, and surrendered in 1945. So Japan gave back the colony of Korea. | ||
| 담당강사 | cynthia2usa | 등록일 | 2021-05-27 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Great writing! Thank you for sharing it with me; I love history. If you have any more that you need me to revise, please feel free to send it to me! Have a great day!
But 30 Years later, Japan went to World War 2 and surrendered in 1945. So Japan gave back the colony of Korea. |
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