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제목 Divided Korea part2-1 등록일 2021-06-09
내용 After World war II, the two victors, America and Russia(the Soviet) entered Korea to disarm Japanese troops.

Russia controlled north of the 38th parallel on the Korean Peninsula, and America controlled south of the 38th parallel.

Because at that time, it was Cold War between capitalism and communism, and each tried to systemize the Korean Peninsula.

So by this time, Korea was actually divided into two.
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Hi Daniel! Good writing! I am learning about Korean history thanks to you :)


After World war II, the two victors, America and Russia(the Soviet), entered Korea to disarm Japanese troops.

Russia controlled the north of the 38th parallel of the Korean Peninsula, and America controlled the south of the 38th parallel.

Because at that time, it was the Cold War between capitalism and communism, and each tried to systemize the Korean Peninsula.

So by(instead of by, you can also use at) this time, Korea was divided into two.

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