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제목 Divided Korea part2-2 등록일 2021-06-09
내용 Later, Kim Il-sung, who was inserted by Russia, established a dictatorial regime in North Korea,

Rlee Syngman who was selected by America became a president of South Korea.

But 3 years later, in June 1950 North Korea started a war to communize the Korean Peninsula.

After the cease-fire in 1953, it is divided into the South and the North as it is now.
담당강사 cynthia2usa 등록일 2021-06-10
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Excellent writing! ~I have so many questions about Korean history now; now I want to read and learn more.

See you shortly in class :)

Later, Kim Il-sung, who was inserted by Russia, established a dictatorial regime in North Korea,

Rlee Syngman, who was selected by America, became the president of South Korea.

But three years later, in June 1950, North Korea started a war to communize the Korean Peninsula.

After the cease-fire in 1953, it was divided into the South and the North as it is now.

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