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제목 2021-06-22 등록일 2021-06-22
내용 When I worked for the casino, my shift/my shift time was from 5 PM to 2 AM. Most coworkers went home at 6 PM. Therefore, I worked alone most of the time. So, I was happy with my shift/my shift time.

When I went to work, my coworkers were finishing THEIR WORK to go home.

I like the sound of leaves and branches of trees when it winds.
I like the sound of trees' leaves and branches when it winds.
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When I worked for the casino, my shift/my shift time was from 5 PM to 2 AM. Most coworkers went home at 6 PM. Therefore, I worked alone most of the time. So, I was happy with my shift/my shift time.

When I went to work, my coworkers were finishing THEIR WORK to go home.

I like the sound of leaves and branches of trees when it winds.
I like the sound of trees' leaves and branches when it winds. **

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