**CORRECTIONS**

The rain season is here in Korea.
>> The *rainy season is here in Korea.

It kept raining for last weekend.
>> It kept raining *since last weekend.

The accidient raised in a local city, Japen that the slope of a mountain collapsed.
>> The *accident raised in a local city, and the slope of a mountain collapsed in Japan. 

In it's result, a few residents were died and other people were disappeared.
>> As a result, a few residents died and other people were disappeared.

The emergency fighter are looking for them but couldn't do.
>> The emergency fighters were looking for them but couldn't do *it.

I was terrible for the news and worried about our country because located right next to Japen.
>> I *felt terrible for the news and worried about our country because * it's located right next to *Japan.

Also, I had to work overtime in my office because I am a offical servant in Seoul City Hall, the capital of Korea.
>> Also, I had to work overtime in my office because I am *an official servant in Seoul City Hall *which is the capital of *South Korea.

I stood up all the night, Saturday to prepare for any accident.
>> I stood up all night *on Saturday to prepare for any accident.

Happily, any thing didn't occur
>> Happily, *nothing anything didn't occur.