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제목 | My son went to the army. | 등록일 | 2021-07-06 |
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내용 | So sad! Korean adult men must serve the army. Before going into it, they have the health medical check to get confirmed wheather they are able to stay in the army. So my son went to the army 3 months ago. I also had been to it long time ago and I had some problems there, such as mental pain, adaptation and groupe life disorder. My son has the same problems now as what I experienced. But parents have do nothing to him except that encourage him when call each other. I believe him to solve this difficulties and adapt the mood for the army. I only wish time to go quickly untill seeing him again. |
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담당강사 | Celine | 등록일 | 2021-07-06 |
첨삭 내용 | **CORRECTIONS**
So sad! Before going into it, they have the health medical check to get confirmed wheather they are able to stay in the army. So my son went to the army 3 months ago. I also had been to it long time ago and I had some problems there, such as mental pain, adaptation and groupe life disorder. My son has the same problems now as what I experienced. But parents have do nothing to him except that encourage him when call each other. I believe him to solve this difficulties and adapt the mood for the army. I only wish time to go quickly untill seeing him again. |