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제목 What is your hobby? 등록일 2021-07-08
내용 What is your hobby?
What do you do in your free time?
I like painting when I have free time but I don't have a place to paint in my home.
My neigberhood say that I have a painting talent and I think to do, too.
it need a painting teacher, ingredient, tools so it costs a small fortune.
I am a salaried worker and don't have some money.
I need to save money to keep painting.
But I will probably quit my hobby when I retire in one and a half year because I have to live only on my pension and it isn't enough to pay my cost of living.
I should adapt to the situation and look for happiness.
See ya!
담당강사 Celine 등록일 2021-07-08
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**CORRECTIONS**

What is your hobby?
>> Correct sentence. 

What do you do in your free time?
>> Correct sentence. 

I like painting when I have free time but I don't have a place to paint in my home.
>> I like painting when I have free time, but I don't have a place to paint in my home.

My neigberhood say that I have a painting talent and I think to do, too.
>> My *neighbor says that I have a painting talent and I think so too.

it need a painting teacher, ingredient, tools so it costs a small fortune.
>> It needs a painting teacher, ingredients, and tools so it costs a small fortune.

I am a salaried worker and don't have some money.
>> I am a salaried worker and don't have *much money.

I need to save money to keep painting.
>> Correct sentence. 

But I will probably quit my hobby when I retire in one and a half year because I have to live only on my pension and it isn't enough to pay my cost of living.
>> But I will probably quit my hobby when I retire in one and a half years because I have to live only *through my pension and it isn't enough to pay my cost of living. 

I should adapt to the situation and look for happiness.
>> Correct sentence. 

See ya!

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>> Hi John, it's not too late to pursue your talent. You don't have to be rich or have a lot of money to pay attention to your talent. Just do what makes you happy. 

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