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제목 | What is your hobby? | 등록일 | 2021-07-08 |
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내용 | What is your hobby? What do you do in your free time? I like painting when I have free time but I don't have a place to paint in my home. My neigberhood say that I have a painting talent and I think to do, too. it need a painting teacher, ingredient, tools so it costs a small fortune. I am a salaried worker and don't have some money. I need to save money to keep painting. But I will probably quit my hobby when I retire in one and a half year because I have to live only on my pension and it isn't enough to pay my cost of living. I should adapt to the situation and look for happiness. See ya! |
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담당강사 | Celine | 등록일 | 2021-07-08 |
첨삭 내용 | **CORRECTIONS** What is your hobby? What do you do in your free time? I like painting when I have free time but I don't have a place to paint in my home. My neigberhood say that I have a painting talent and I think to do, too. it need a painting teacher, ingredient, tools so it costs a small fortune. I am a salaried worker and don't have some money. I need to save money to keep painting. But I will probably quit my hobby when I retire in one and a half year because I have to live only on my pension and it isn't enough to pay my cost of living. I should adapt to the situation and look for happiness. See ya! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ >> Hi John, it's not too late to pursue your talent. You don't have to be rich or have a lot of money to pay attention to your talent. Just do what makes you happy. |