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제목 Buddhist monk and Meat 등록일 2021-07-08
내용 I couldn't tell the following because 20 minutes was too short.
- A Buddhist is not a monk. A Buddhist is a normal person who believes in Buddhism. Buddhists eat meat.
- A Buddhist monk is not allowed to eat meat, but when a monk becomes ill or old, he may eat meat to get proper nutrition.
- Buddhist temples serve meat to young monks.
- I think Buddhism is a type of philosophy, not religion.
- I saw many parents who were not qualified. I think the decision whether a child should eat meat or not must be made by experts, not by parents.
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I couldn't tell the following because 20 minutes was too short.
- A Buddhist is not a monk. A Buddhist is a normal person who believes in Buddhism. Buddhists eat meat.
- A Buddhist monk is not allowed to eat meat, but when a monk becomes ill or old, he may eat meat to get proper nutrition.
- Buddhist temples serve meat to young monks.
- I think Buddhism is a type of philosophy, not religion.
- I saw many parents who were not qualified. I think the decision whether a child should eat meat or not must be made by experts, not by parents.

Thanks for your thoughts, Dong-hoon.  We'll talk tomorrow.     Lucky

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