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제목 I stayed up lastnight. 등록일 2021-07-12
내용 I stayed up lastnight.
Two things caused that to me.
The first, I can't usually sleep whenever I have some coffee during the daytime.
Coffee is the favorite drink to people but it is not in my case.
The second, I am worried about my son's situation.
He isn't adapting in the mood of the army so he feel upset, depressed and have a headache.
He is going to the hospital in there.
I wish him to get better shortly.
My wife isn't sleeping these days like me.
We also feel depressed that we can nothing for him
So we went to church at dawn every day but stoped to go there due to Covid-19.
Enjoy today.
담당강사 Celine 등록일 2021-07-14
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**CORRECTIONS**

I stayed up lastnight.
>> I stayed up *last night. 

Two things caused that to me.
>> Correct sentence. 

The first, I can't usually sleep whenever I have some coffee during the daytime.
>> First, I can't usually sleep whenever I have some coffee during the daytime.

Coffee is the favorite drink to people but it is not in my case.
>> Correct sentence. 

The second, I am worried about my son's situation.
>> Second, I am worried about my son's situation.

He isn't adapting in the mood of the army so he feel upset, depressed and have a headache.
>> He isn't adapting *to the mood of the army so he *feels upset, depressed, and has a headache.

He is going to the hospital in there.
>> He is going to the hospital there.

I wish him to get better shortly.
>> I wish him to get better *immediately. 

My wife isn't sleeping these days like me.
>> Correct sentence. 

We also feel depressed that we can nothing for him
So we went to church at dawn every day but stoped to go there due to Covid-19.
Enjoy today.
>> We also feel depressed that we can't do anything for him, so we went to the church at dawn every day but stopped going there due to Covid-19.

Enjoy today.

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