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제목 | I stayed up lastnight. | 등록일 | 2021-07-12 |
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내용 | I stayed up lastnight. Two things caused that to me. The first, I can't usually sleep whenever I have some coffee during the daytime. Coffee is the favorite drink to people but it is not in my case. The second, I am worried about my son's situation. He isn't adapting in the mood of the army so he feel upset, depressed and have a headache. He is going to the hospital in there. I wish him to get better shortly. My wife isn't sleeping these days like me. We also feel depressed that we can nothing for him So we went to church at dawn every day but stoped to go there due to Covid-19. Enjoy today. |
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담당강사 | Celine | 등록일 | 2021-07-14 |
첨삭 내용 | **CORRECTIONS** I stayed up lastnight. Two things caused that to me. The first, I can't usually sleep whenever I have some coffee during the daytime. Coffee is the favorite drink to people but it is not in my case. The second, I am worried about my son's situation. He isn't adapting in the mood of the army so he feel upset, depressed and have a headache. He is going to the hospital in there. I wish him to get better shortly. My wife isn't sleeping these days like me. We also feel depressed that we can nothing for him Enjoy today. |