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제목 I booked vaccine for Covid-19 등록일 2021-07-13
내용 I booked vaccine for Covid-19
The goverment reported that the people wanted vaccine should reserve it on line from on Monday.
So I couldn't go to bed and I waited to midnight watching TV.
I couldn't conect on the site because hundreds of thousands tried to get on line.
But I couln't give up the reservation so I paticently tried to reach to the Internet.
I luckily made it around at 3 a.m.
Numbers of people couldn't make a reservation for vaccine.
The president, Moon was annoy his people because he lied that vaccine was enough for people.
I don't believe and trust his policy
I feel sick with him
담당강사 Celine 등록일 2021-07-14
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**CORRECTIONS**

I booked vaccine for Covid-19
>> I booked for the vaccination Covid-19.

The goverment reported that the people wanted vaccine should reserve it on line from on Monday.
>> The *government reported that the people *who wanted vaccine should reserve it *online from Monday. 

So I couldn't go to bed and I waited to midnight watching TV.
>> So I couldn't go to bed and I waited *until midnight watching TV.

I couldn't conect on the site because hundreds of thousands tried to get on line.
>> I couldn't *connect on the website because hundreds of thousands tried to get *online.

But I couln't give up the reservation so I paticently tried to reach to the Internet.
>> But I *couldn't give up the reservation so I *patiently tried to reach on the Internet. 

I luckily made it around at 3 a.m.
>> Correct sentence. 

Numbers of people couldn't make a reservation for vaccine.
>> Numbers of people couldn't make a reservation for *the vaccine.

The president, Moon was annoy his people because he lied that vaccine was enough for people.
>> President Moon annoys the people because he lied that vaccine was enough for the people.

I don't believe and trust his policy
>> I don't believe and trust his policy(.)

I feel sick with him
>> I feel sick with him(.)

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