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제목 I am sorry to you second time 등록일 2021-07-14
내용 I am sorry to you second time.
Why did I do so?
Is it caused by the age getting or problem from my memory?
I exactly knew the class by when left work.
But I forgot the lessen during dinner in home and my wife and I took a walk around the park as usual time.
Oh my goddness, the call from you raised on me.
She told me that I had to get a medical check for my head.
I felt bad but I couldn't say nothing.
I was upset for her so we didn't have any talks until came back home.
We saw on TV in the living room no talking each other and went to bed separately.
It was hot, humit and no windy in night.
담당강사 Celine 등록일 2021-07-14
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**CORRECTIONS**

I am sorry to you second time.
>> I am sorry to you *the second time.

Why did I do so?
>> Correct Sentence. 

Is it caused by the age getting or problem from my memory?
>> Is it *the cause of getting older or a memory problem? 

I exactly knew the class by when left work.
But I forgot the lessen during dinner in home and my wife and I took a walk around the park as usual time.
>> I exactly knew the class when leaving the work, but I forgot the lesson during dinner *at home and my wife and I took a walk around the park as usual time.

Oh my goddness, the call from you raised on me.
>> Oh my *goodness, the call from you raised on me. 

She told me that I had to get a medical check for my head.
>> Correct sentence. 

I felt bad but I couldn't say nothing.
> > I felt bad but I couldn't say *anything. 

I was upset for her so we didn't have any talks until came back home.
>> I was upset *to her so we didn't have any talks until we came back home. 

We saw on TV in the living room no talking each other and went to bed separately.
>> We watched TV in the living room *without talking to each other and went to bed separately.

It was hot, humit and no windy in night.
>> It was hot, humid, and not windy at night.  

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