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| 제목 | Tokyo olimpic beds | 등록일 | 2021-07-22 |
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| 내용 | US atheletes shared photos of the beds, alleging that the design is aimed at avoding intimacy among atheletes, particulary in light of preventing the spread of COVID 19. However Tokyo Olimpic commitee announced that Athletes’s beds are made almost entirely out of renewable materials., alleging that cardboard beds are actually stronger than the one made of wood or steel. |
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| 담당강사 | Ava2 | 등록일 | 2021-07-23 |
| 첨삭 내용 |
US atheletes shared photos of their beds. Alleging that the design is aimed to avoid intimacy among atheletes, particulary in light of preventing the spread of COVID 19. However Tokyo Olimpic commitee announced that Athletes’ beds are made almost entirely out of renewable materials. Alleging that cardboard beds are actually stronger than the one made of wood or steel. Thank you and Happy weekend!
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