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| 제목 | France sends new statue of liberty to US | 등록일 | 2021-08-05 |
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| 내용 | Statue of libery is one of the most iconic place in New York. In 17 century, After American Civil War is over, French president proposed the idea how best they could express its support for freedom and democracy. They used the image of Roman goddess. A crown with seven spikes means lights stretching out to the world and a torch symbollize the way to the freedom showing the path to liberty. Statue of Liberty has becom a symbol of the friendship between two countries. Statue of liberty will not be replaced with a new one. New statue of libery will stay in Washington D.C. |
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| 담당강사 | Ava2 | 등록일 | 2021-08-06 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Statue of libery is one of the most iconic place in New York. In 17 century, After American Civil War is over, French president proposed the idea how best they could express its support for freedom and democracy. They used the image of Roman goddess. A crown with seven spikes means lights stretching out to the world and a torch symbollize the way to the freedom showing the path to liberty. Statue of Liberty has becom a symbol of the friendship between two countries.
Statue of libery is one of the most iconic places in New York. In 17TH century, After American Civil War was over, French president proposed the idea on how to best express their support for freedom and democracy. They used the image of Roman goddess. A crown with seven spikes means lights stretching out to the world and a torch symbollizes the way to freedom showing the path to liberty. Statue of Liberty has become a symbol of friendship between two countries. |
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