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| 제목 | Conflict begins again in Gaza. | 등록일 | 2021-08-10 |
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| 내용 | For more than 50 years, conflict between Israel and Palestine has become a main issue in Middle-east. Nowadays Palestinian protests against excessive use of forces was put down by Israli militery forces. Then Palestinian militant group fired more than 200 rockets into Israli territory. In response Israli Air force launched an air strike in Gaza Area. Fortunately leaders from Israel and Palestine made a ceasefire agreement. However without any radical solutions, battle between two countries will last. | ||
| 담당강사 | Ava2 | 등록일 | 2021-08-11 |
| 첨삭 내용 | For more than 50 years, conflict between Israel and Palestine has become a main issue in Middle-east. Nowadays Palestinian protests against excessive use of forces was put down by Israli militery forces. Then Palestinian militant group fired more than 200 rockets into Israli territory. In response Israli Air force launched an air strike in Gaza Area. Fortunately leaders from Israel and Palestine made a ceasefire agreement. However without any radical solutions, battle between two countries will last.
For more than 50 years, conflict between Israel and Palestine has become a main issue in Middle east. Nowadays Palestinian protests excessive use of forces was put down by Israeli military forces. Then Palestinian militant group fired more than 200 rockets into Israeli territory. In response Israeli Air force launched an air strike in Gaza Area. Fortunately, leaders from Israel and Palestine made a ceasefire agreement. However, without any radical solutions, battle between two countries will last. |
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