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제목 I want to be a English teacher 등록일 2021-08-18
내용 I want to be a English teacher i grow up.
English teachers work on school or academy.
They work in the school or academy and teach children or people.
I like this job because i love to study and teach English.
I will teach and study many things, when i am a English teacher.
English teachers need to be smart,kind and responsible.
They also need to knew a lot about words and gramma.
IT is a difficult job,so i need to prepear.
I will go to a collage and study hard.
I think i will be a great English teacher someday!
담당강사 Trixie 등록일 2021-08-19
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I want to be an English teacher i grow up.
English teachers work in school or academy.
They work in the school or academy and teach children or people.
I like this job because i love to study and teach English.
I will teach and study many things, when i become an English teacher.
English teachers need to be smart,kind and responsible.
They also need to know a lot about vocabulary and grammar.
IT is a difficult job,so i need to prepare.
I will go to collage and study hard.
I think i will be a great English teacher someday!

 

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