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| 제목 | Homework for lesson 32. | 등록일 | 2021-08-19 |
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| 내용 | Dear all employees, I am pleased to inform you that a swimsuit promotion is scheduled. This event will be the last sale this summer. Meet the latest products at an 85% discount. This event will be held only for one day on the second floor of IMC Mall on Wednesday. Hurry up and grab it. Best regards, Maketing department |
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| 담당강사 | Celine | 등록일 | 2021-08-20 |
| 첨삭 내용 | **CORRECTIONS** Dear all employees, I am pleased to inform you that a swimsuit promotion is scheduled. This event will be the last sale this summer. Meet the latest products at an 85% discount. This event will be held only for one day on the second floor of IMC Mall on Wednesday. Hurry up and grab it. Best regards, |
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