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| 제목 | My special necklace. | 등록일 | 2021-08-25 |
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| 내용 | My birthday is on October 8th. Every year, i have a birthday party. I invited my friends at rastorant. We eat many foods, and then i open gifts. Last year, I opened a heart box and saw a very beautiful necklace. It is golden with golden hearts on it. I thought it very pretty! I wear my necklace every day. It reminds me of my mother. I hope i never lose my necklace. |
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| 담당강사 | Trixie | 등록일 | 2021-08-26 |
| 첨삭 내용 | My birthday is on October 8th. Last year,
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