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제목 My letter & diary (28 Sep 2021) 등록일 2021-09-29
내용 Hello mandela~

I'm going to write my english letter and diary from now.
I expect to improve my expression skill for englsh.
If it is possible, i hope to remain the diary 4 times a week.
Please reply my sentence and correct.
Additionally, i would like you to suggest good expression.

Thanks for your many support and teaching.
Have a good day.
Bye.
담당강사 mandela1usa 등록일 2021-09-29
첨삭 내용

Hello Mandela~

I'm going to write my english letters and diary on here from now.
I expect to improve my expression skills in English.
If it is possible, i hope to write the diary 4 times a week.
Please reply with my sentences corrected.
Additionally, i would like for you to suggest some good expressions.

Thanks for your support and teachings.
Have a good day.
Bye.

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