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| 제목 | My father | 등록일 | 2021-09-30 |
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| 내용 | My father is sick. He was very healthy and passionate person. I have been thought that he has always best condition. He can't to walk himself. So he is going to surgery of needs. I hope he is healthier better than now. |
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| 담당강사 | Julie | 등록일 | 2021-10-01 |
| 첨삭 내용 | My father is sick. |
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