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제목 I can’t answer your call today. 등록일 2021-10-01
내용 Good morning. Mia
I’m sorry I can’t answer your call today. I forgot I have the appointment to go to the doctor for my father’s pelvis bone. I’m going to drive in the highway at our lesson time.
As I told you before, my father had a surgery for the broken pelvis bone. He is spending the time to recover the bone condition at home yet. So I accompany with my father and mother to the hospital once every two weeks.
See you next Monday.
담당강사 Mia 등록일 2021-10-04
첨삭 내용

Good morning Mia,
I’m sorry I can’t answer your call today. I forgot that I have the an appointment to go to the with a doctor for my father’s pelvis bone. I’m going to drive in on the highway at during our lesson time.
As I told you before, my father had a surgery for the a broken pelvis bone. He is spending the time to recover the bone's condition at home yet. So, I will accompany with my father him with my and mother to the hospital once every two weeks.
See you next Monday.

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