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| 제목 | 2021-10-25 (1) | 등록일 | 2021-10-25 |
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| 내용 | I have about $730,000 in my bank accounts. Starting in June 2035, I will receive monthly pension that is about $1,300. The amount of monthly pension will rise according to inflation rate. I don’t own any real estate now. I have thought about what I would do when I am old. I think it would be good for my mental health to work for about 5 hours a day, even if the work does not bring me much money. I am thinking about buying a small fishing boat to become a fisherman. I am thinking about other options, too. | ||
| 담당강사 | Neal2 | 등록일 | 2021-10-25 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I have about $730,000 in my bank accounts. Starting in June 2035, I will receive monthly pension that is about $1,300. The amount of monthly pension will rise according to inflation rate. I don’t own any real estate now. I have thought about what I would do when I am old. I think it would be good for my mental health to work for about 5 hours a day, even if the work does not bring me much money. I am thinking about buying a small fishing boat to become a fisherman. I am thinking about other options, too.** |
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