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제목 My problem is have many acne. 등록일 2021-10-27
내용 Dear Mr. Advice.
I have to many acne in my face and body.
Please tell me how to solve this!
Acne girl.
Dear acne girl,
You must feel bad about have many acne.
Here are a few tips.
First, don't eat to many fast food.
Instead, eat fast food you eat vegetables and fruits.
Second,you wash your body and face clearly.
This can cause stress, so try to reduce your stress levels.
If you have acne gets worse, you had better exersice every day.
You can get advice from your mother.
Follow these tips, and you will be no have acne!
담당강사 Gem_AM 등록일 2021-10-28
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    My problem is I have an acne.

Dear Mr. Advice.
I have grave acne on my face and body.
Please tell me how to solve this!
Acne girl.
Dear Acne Girl,
You must be feeling very bad about having grave acne.
Here are a few tips.
First, don't eat too many fast food.
Instead, eat vegetables and fruits.
Second, wash your body and face very well.
Acne is usually caused by stress, so try to reduce your stress levels.
If your acne gets worse, it is better to exersice every day.
You can get advice from your mother.
Follow these tips, and you will have no more acne!

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