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| 제목 | 2021-10-28 (1) | 등록일 | 2021-10-28 |
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| 내용 | On December 24, 2020, JDC sent a letter to JEINS, directing JEINS to reprimand the IT Director. On that letter, JEINS said, “According to KIM Dong-hoon, the IT Director didn’t install any ventilation or cooling system in many network equipment rooms, even though installing them was the main reason for the school to have the network project.” This is the first written reason why JDC directed JEINS to reprimand the IT Director. On March 18, 2021, JEINS issued a decision that the IT Director harassed me in the workplace. The decision was delivered to the school, the IT Director and me. |
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| 담당강사 | Neal2 | 등록일 | 2021-10-28 |
| 첨삭 내용 | On December 24, 2020, JDC sent a letter to JEINS, directing JEINS to reprimand the IT Director. On that letter, JEINS said, “According to KIM Dong-hoon, the IT Director didn’t install any ventilation or cooling system in many network equipment rooms, even though installing them was the main reason for the school to have the network project.” This is the first written reason why JDC directed JEINS to reprimand the IT Director. |
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