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제목 Do you agree or disagree? The best way to motivate employees is to tell how good their work is. 등록일 2021-10-30
내용 I agree with it. Employees can satisfy the desire to be admired by compliment. Besides, compliment makes office an enjoyable place to work.
First,because we are social beings, we have a need for acceptance. Therefore, when you get a praise in your office, you feel happy and it motivates you work hard. My team boss often tells me how good my work is then I feel great so I want to work like a bee.
Second, compliment delivers positive energy. That is why praise makes the office a good mood. Then it helps workers have a good relationship, they cooperate with each other, and it maximize synergy e
담당강사 Janet 등록일 2021-11-02
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I agree with it. Employees can satisfy the desire to be admired by compliment. Besides, compliment makes office an enjoyable place to work.
First,because we are social beings, we have a need for acceptance. Therefore, when you get a praise in your office, you feel happy and it motivates you work hard. My team boss often tells me how good my work is then I feel great so I want to work like a bee.
Second, compliment delivers positive energy. That is why praise makes the office a good mood. Then it helps workers have a good relationship, they cooperate with each other, and it maximize synergy e

 

I agree with it. Employees can satisfy the desire to be admired by the compliment. Besides, compliment makes office an enjoyable place to work. Therefore, when you get a price in your office, you feel happy and it motivates you to work hard. My team boss often tells me how good my work is then I feel great so I want to work like a bee.

Second, compliment delivers positive energy. That is why praise makes the office a good mood. Then it helps workers have a good relationship, they cooperate with each other, and it maximizes synergy.

 

First, because we are social beings, we have a need for acceptance.

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