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제목 Introduction-2 등록일 2021-11-02
내용 Furthermore, I compare and analyze pipelines of other companies with similar technologies, and identify strengths and weaknesses.
And I use them to make good strategies.
In 2021, two contracts for collaboration were signed, a collaboration agreement with one domestic company is in progress, and discussions are underway to proceed with investment in one overseas company.
I would like to play a role in establishing an excellent strategy according to the vision of A COMPANY by using my ability following with the advice of internal experts on the pipelines and
technologies of A COMPANY.
담당강사 Heni2 등록일 2021-11-03
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Furthermore, I compare and analyze pipelines of other companies with similar technologies, and identify THEIR strengths and weaknesses.,
and I use them to make good strategies.
In 2021, two contracts for collaboration were signed. Additionally, a collaboration agreement with one domestic company is in progress, and discussions are underway to proceed with investment in one overseas company.
I would like to play a role in establishing an excellent strategy according to the vision of A COMPANY by using my ability WHILE following with the advice of internal experts on the pipelines and
technologies of THE COMPANY.

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