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| 제목 | my introduction | 등록일 | 2021-11-18 |
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| 내용 | I run a business with 20 employees at a company in Gimhae. The main items handled are products for hair designers and dog owners. For example, scissors, clipper, water purifier, straightener, etc. I have two children, 18 years old son and 11 years old daugher. I run my business with my husband together. |
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| 담당강사 | Amanda1 | 등록일 | 2021-12-01 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I run a business with 20 employees at a company in Gimhae. The main items handled are products for hair designers and dog owners. For example, scissors, clipper, water purifier, straightener, etc. |
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