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| 제목 | Lunar New Year | 등록일 | 2021-11-25 |
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| 내용 | Dear Lina, What is your favorite holiday? Mine is Lunar New Year! Lunar New Year Is celebrated in Korea. In Korea, it is on the first day of the Lunar calender. We eat rice cake soup and songpyeon on this day. Every year, my family goes to my grandparents house. I set the table and help my mother and grandmother for make the New years foods. Then we eat and talk about the things that we are thankful for. This year, i am thankful for my friends and family. I hope we celebrate Lunar New Year together for many more years! Your friends BO MI. |
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| 담당강사 | Trixie | 등록일 | 2021-11-26 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Dear Lina,
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