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| 제목 | Volunteering at the nursing house | 등록일 | 2021-12-01 |
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| 내용 | Last year, i decided to do some volunteer work. First, i thought about places to volunteer at. I chose the Nursing house litter near my house. There are many elder people there. They can't go outside or see their families often. That made me feel sad. Every Sunday, i went to the Nursing house at 2:00 P.M. I played games with the residents and talk with me. I went home at 5:00 P.M. I always felt much happier after spending time with them. Although i'm a teenager, i'm glad that i can help the residents. I am going to volunteer there again this year |
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| 담당강사 | Trixie | 등록일 | 2021-12-02 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Last year, i decided to do some volunteer work.
this is great |
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