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제목 some sentences2 등록일 2021-12-16
내용 The synthesized spherical carbon particles was used as domains.
The domains were chemically or physically activated under various conditions.
Based on the observation, we attempted to propose the activation mechanisms of carbon materials.
We expected to efficiently synthesize activated carbon materials for various fields through the proposed activation mechanisms.
담당강사 Gem_AM 등록일 2021-12-20
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The synthesized spherical carbon particles was used as domains.
The domains were chemically or physically activated under various conditions.
Based on the observation, we attempted to propose the activation mechanisms of carbon materials.
We expected to efficiently synthesize activated carbon materials for various fields through the proposed activation mechanisms.

Hi Jacob,

Good job! There was no correction. ^_^

 

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