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제목 Request for checking my writing 등록일 2021-12-28
내용 Hello Heni,

The followings are a part of letter that I made at work and I would like to see if it is right or not.

* B90001902
The batch number is a 9-digit number consisting of a combination of numerical and English letters.
- First alphabetic capital letter and the following number refer to year of manufacturing (please refer to the following table 2).

It looks like some words are redundant in meaning but I am not sure...
It would be great if you could check the above sentence.
Thank you~!
담당강사 Heni1 등록일 2021-12-28
첨삭 내용

Hello Heni,

The following (s WE NEVER PUT AN "S" ON FOLLOWING) are a part of letter that I made at work and I would like to see if it is right or not.

* B90001902
The batch number is a 9-digit number consisting of a combination of numerBERS and English letters.
- First (alphabetic NOT NEEDED) capital letter and the following number refer to THE year of manufacturing (please refer to the following table 2).

It looks like some words are redundant in meaning but I am not sure...
It would be great if you could check the above sentence.
Thank you~!

 

This does not look redundant, but please note my corrections.

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