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제목 Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear. 등록일 2022-01-30
내용 Since government funding budget comes from the tax, it is very important to use it in a right way. However, I disagree with this statement. In my opinion, it is important to fund scientific research helpful to the public. For this purpose, sometimes, consequences can be unclear in some circumstances. At the same time, even unclear consequences can be helpful to the public and to other projects and study. Moreover, in general, private sector used to fun only scientific research whose consequences are clear. In this circumstance, government should take different stance for development of studies
담당강사 mhae2 등록일 2022-01-31
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Since the government funding budget comes from the tax, it is very important to use it in the right way. However, I disagree with this statement. In my opinion, it is important to fund scientific research helpful to the public. For this purpose, sometimes, consequences can be unclear in some circumstances. At the same time, even unclear consequences can be helpful to the public and to other projects and studies. Moreover, in general, the private sector used to fund only scientific research whose consequences are clear. In this circumstance, the government should take a different stance for the development of studies. 

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I couldn't agree more. It was nice hearing your opinion about this. Great job! I hope you are always safe. See you in class. heart

-T. Mhae 

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