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제목 Personal color 등록일 2022-02-22
내용 Hello Lyndsay!

We talked about my personal color last night.
I am disappointed that I aleady bought many items good for warm tone.
However It is not good for me... but I'm going to wear them even thought they are worst colors for me!
It is a funny episode.
I want to buy clothes which colors are white and pastel.
I need to save money for paying my lease increase.
I will buy new items in March.

Thanks for correcting my writing and your kindness.
I am happy to talk with you!

BoBae
담당강사 Lyndsay2 등록일 2022-02-22
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Hello Lyndsay!

We talked about my personal color last night.
I am disappointed that I aleady bought many items good for a warm tone.
However It they are is not good for me... but I'm going to wear them even though they are the worst colors for me!
It is a funny episode.
I want to buy clothes which colors are white and pastel.
I need to save money for paying my lease increase.
I will buy new items in March.

Thanks for correcting my writing and your kindness.
I am happy to talk with you!

BoBae

Hi BoBae!

Don't worry about the personal color. It's good that you want to wear clothes that best suit you, but with your beautiful personality (and I'm sure pretty face as well, even though I have never actually seen you), I think that any and all colors must look perfect on you!

You didn't tell me about your lease increase. That doesn't seem very fair to raise the price after such a short period of time, especially with the real estate market constantly on the rise these days. I'm sorry.

You know that I am always happy to talk with you and I enjoy recieving your written notes as well! I will try to correct any minor errors to help you perfect your English writing skills.

I look forward to our next class together, my friend.

Lyndsay

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