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제목 | It’s sundaynight | 등록일 | 2022-03-29 |
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내용 | My babies all are in their bed. My wife doing some her stuff is in front of me. It has been a long day. I went to the wedding which my customer’s daughter get merried. I just met my customer and gave gift for his daugther’s event. I took short time. After I came back home, I played “Nintendo”game with my daughter and sun. When she got in the trouble in the game, I help her. And then, we prepared to go to shopping mall, and had early dinner in “Outback Steakhouse”. I bought some books for my children I hope that my English skill will be improved, someday.. Thank you for reading. |
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담당강사 | Allie1 | 등록일 | 2022-04-01 |
첨삭 내용 | My babies all are in their bed. My wife doing some her stuff is in front of me. [My wife, doing some of her stuff, is in front of me.] It has been a long day. I went to the wedding which my customer’s daughter get merried. [I went to the wedding of my customer's daughter.] I just met my customer and gave gift for his daugther’s event. [I just met my customer and gave him my gift for his daughter's wedding.] I took short time. [It was very quick. / It only took a short time.] After I came back home, I played “Nintendo”game with my daughter and sun. [I played a "Nintendo" game with my daughter and son.] When she got in the trouble in the game, I help her. [ When my daughter was getting in trouble in the game, I helped her out.] And then, we prepared to go to shopping mall, and had early dinner in “Outback Steakhouse”. [And then, we prepared to go to the shopping mall and had an early dinner in "Outback Steakhouse." I bought some books for my children. I hope that my English skill will be improved, someday.. [I hope that my English skills will improve someday.] |