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제목 The effect of a parent, teacher, or friend on your life (1) 등록일 2022-04-01
내용 Each person has a different personality.
I thought that the personality is made up of 50% nurture and 50% natural.
The personality of natural is inheried by parent.
The personality of nurture is formed by learning from teachers, seniors, and friends as people grow up.
With the natural personality that people received from thier's parents, they choose friends and seniors.
However, they don't choose, they were chosen.
Natually, the people who don't like me become to falling apart.
I thought It means "Birds of feather flock together."
담당강사 Lisa1 등록일 2022-04-04
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Each person has a different personality.
I thought that personality was 50% nurture and 50% nature
Nature is inherited from your parents.
Nurture is gained by learning from teachers, seniors, and friends as people grow up.
People choose friends according to their nature. (I am not sure what you are trying to say here.)
However, they don't choose, they were chosen. 
Natually, the people who don't like me become to falling apart.
I thought It means "Birds of feather flock together." (I don't understand these last three lines or how they are related to what you said before.)

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