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제목 The effect of a parent, teacher, or friend on your life (End) 등록일 2022-04-01
내용 Because of this influence, people make a friends with someone similar to me even when they become adult.
Nurture and natural factors such as taste, lifestyle, height, weight, food, and culture are combined to define "me."
one gradually develops his own philosophy, ego, and ideas.
These things are hard to change as I got older.
The older I get, the more confirmation bias I have.
for this reason, there are the effect of a parent, teacher, or friend on my life and It is important to make a good friend.
because I effect something in my interpersonal relationship same as others do it.
Thank you.
담당강사 Lisa1 등록일 2022-04-04
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Because of this influence, people make friends with similar people, even when they are adults.
Nature and nurture combine to define oneself.
One gradually develops their own philosophy, ego, and ideas.
These things are harder to change as you get older.
The older I get, the more confirmation bias I have.
For this reason, there are the effect of a parent, teacher, or friend on my life and It is important to make a good friend.
because I effect something in my interpersonal relationship same as others do it. (I am not sure what you are trying to say in these two sentences.)
Thank you.

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