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제목 Why I selected my major? (2) 등록일 2022-04-01
내용 in my house, and he repaired my computer, which feels me so cool in my youth's view.
In my memories, he excuted kind of repair-program. (I thought it is command prompt program.) and he was typing some kind of repair-command, and the program explored a lot of text down again, again. and he said "it's done". and trouble resolved.
and since that event, I had a dream I will be programmer. then I selected my major of the computer science.
but I chose liberal arts. I guessed that I wouldn't be able to major.
BUT HOWERVER as people say, "Every cloud has a sliver lining."
(To be continue)
담당강사 Lisa1 등록일 2022-04-04
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He repaired my computer, which was really cool to me as a kid.
From what I remember, he excuted a kind of repair program (I think it might have been the command prompt). He typed some kind of repair command, and the program made a lot of text. Then he said, "It's done," and the problem was resolved.
Since that event, I had a dream to become a programmer, which would have meant selecting the computer science major.
But because I chose liberal arts, I guessed that I wouldn't be able to take that major.
However, as people say, "Every cloud has a silver lining."
(To be continue)

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