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제목 Taking for a child. 등록일 2022-04-04
내용 I want to be a good father. But frankly I didn’t learn how to be a good father.
Now that I have 3children, I just know that all father have to learn how to care for.
I guess my father also felt that feeling like me. All human are not perfect.
So, when we need to change , that is a first step .
I decide to play outdoor activity a day a week.
Running, strolling, ball playing, camping, etc…
담당강사 Allie1 등록일 2022-04-04
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I want to be a good father. But frankly I didn’t learn how to be a good father.

But frankly, I didn't learn how to be a good father. 

Now that I have 3children, I just know that all father have to learn how to care for.

Now that I have 3 children, I just know that all fathers have to learn how to take care of their kids. 

I guess my father also felt that feeling like me. All human are not perfect.

I guess my father also felt the same way as I do now. No one is perfect. 

So, when we need to change , that is a first step .

So, when we needed to change, it was the first step. 

I decide to play outdoor activity a day a week.

I decided to play outdoors with them every week. 

Running, strolling, ball playing, camping, etc…

Like running, strolling, ball games, camping, etc. . . 

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