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제목 | Taking for a child. | 등록일 | 2022-04-04 |
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내용 | I want to be a good father. But frankly I didn’t learn how to be a good father. Now that I have 3children, I just know that all father have to learn how to care for. I guess my father also felt that feeling like me. All human are not perfect. So, when we need to change , that is a first step . I decide to play outdoor activity a day a week. Running, strolling, ball playing, camping, etc… |
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담당강사 | Allie1 | 등록일 | 2022-04-04 |
첨삭 내용 | I want to be a good father. But frankly I didn’t learn how to be a good father. But frankly, I didn't learn how to be a good father. Now that I have 3children, I just know that all father have to learn how to care for. Now that I have 3 children, I just know that all fathers have to learn how to take care of their kids. I guess my father also felt that feeling like me. All human are not perfect. I guess my father also felt the same way as I do now. No one is perfect. So, when we need to change , that is a first step . So, when we needed to change, it was the first step. I decide to play outdoor activity a day a week. I decided to play outdoors with them every week. Running, strolling, ball playing, camping, etc… Like running, strolling, ball games, camping, etc. . . |