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제목 Importance of setting goals 등록일 2022-04-05
내용 I’m 41. I was born in 1982. I didn’t study hard when I was in school. After army, I thought I wasn’t good at anything. So, I wanted to learn what I had missed at that time(basic math etc..). Even though I tried to do what I have to overcome, I still improve myself and there many things to do. Recently, I read 1 English article everyday, it has 2 good aspects. One is that improving understanding English texts, the other is I can know many stories in the world.
담당강사 Allie1 등록일 2022-04-06
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I’m 41. I was born in 1982. I didn’t study hard when I was in school. After army, I thought I wasn’t good at anything. So, I wanted to learn what I had missed at that time(basic math etc..). Even though I tried to do what I have to overcome, I still improve myself and there many things to do.

Even though, I worked on what I had to overcome, I still continue to improve myself and there are many things to do. 

Recently, I read 1 English article everyday, it has 2 good aspects.

Recently, I started reading 1 English article everyday, and I realized it has 2 good benefits. 

One is that improving understanding English texts, the other is I can know many stories in the world.

One is to improve my comprehension of an English text, and the other is I get to know what's happening in the world. 

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