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제목 The effects of cramming for an examination (end) 등록일 2022-04-06
내용 3. When memorizing the next line, remember what I memorized before, and if I fail, I go back to the beginning.
If I stayed up all night and memorizied like this, items that was not organized in my mind remaining as missing links, while you sleep, these things are filled with what I have seen and heard unconsciously.
In my experience, when I did cramming well, in my dream, I would sat on the desk, I would study even in dream.
After dreaming, I got good grades, whereas if I didn't dream, I didn't get good grades.
Consequently, prerequisite is whether “flow” can be used or not.
담당강사 Lisa1 등록일 2022-04-07
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3. When memorizing the next line, remember what I memorized before, and if I fail, go back to the beginning.
If I stayed up all night and memorized like this, items that was not organized in my mind remaining as missing links, while you sleep, these things are filled with what I have seen and heard unconsciously. (I'm not sure what you mean here.)
In my experience, when I studied well, in my dream, I would be sitting at the desk, studying still.
After dreaming, I got good grades, whereas if I didn't dream, I didn't get good grades.
Consequently, prerequisite is whether “flow” can be used or not. (I'm not sure what you mean here.)

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