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제목 | The effects of peer pressure. (1) | 등록일 | 2022-04-07 |
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내용 | We are affected by people because man is a social animal. The effects of peer pressure is very high and individual opinions cannot be freely expressed in Korea. Expressing my opinion have to endure so many things. First, the power of boomers opinion is higher than younger, who feel timid. Boomers always want to be respect to young people. Second, if you resist boomer’s opinion, they always say "How you dare!" Finally, they always say "You will pay for this", but nothing gonna happen. Individual opinions should be respected; however, Boomers use the peer pressure to be respected. TBC next week |
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담당강사 | Lisa1 | 등록일 | 2022-04-08 |
첨삭 내용 | We are affected by people because man is a social animal. |