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| 제목 | The effects of peer pressure. (2) | 등록일 | 2022-04-11 |
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| 내용 | Your advice is right. I got sidetracked. I get back on the track. I’ll rewrite the topic of generational difference later. In Wikipedia, Peer pressure is the direct or indirect influence on people of peers, members of social groups with similar interests, experiences, or social statuses. When I served in the navy, I experienced peer pressure of a smoking. There were 6 members of a ship I worked. Except for me, 5 members were smoker. They didn’t let me in their talking and I didn’t take a break because I wasn’t smoker. I felt alienated, In order to be close to each other... To be continue |
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| 담당강사 | Lisa1 | 등록일 | 2022-04-12 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Your advice is right. I got sidetracked. I will get back on track. I’ll write about the topic of generational difference later. |
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