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제목 The effects of peer pressure. (3) 등록일 2022-04-12
내용 (Following previous writing)
In that situation, I had no choice but to smoke. It might be of the negative peer pressure.
It might sound like an excuse, but I just wanted to talk them, to take a rest, to be friendly.
But I shouldn’t have smoked that. After military service, I didn’t quit smoking. When I realized it, I found myself a heavy smoker.
Now, I quit smoking so painfully, I’ll write about the topic of the quitting smoking later.
Return to the subject, on the other hand, peer pressure has a positive aspect.
(To be continued)
담당강사 Lisa1 등록일 2022-04-13
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(Continuing the previous writing)
In that situation, I had no choice but to smoke. It might have been because of the negative peer pressure.
It might sound like an excuse, but I just wanted to talk them, to take a rest, to get to know them.
But I shouldn’t have started smoking. After my military service, I didn’t quit smoking. Before I realized it, I found that I had become a heavy smoker.
Quitting smoking was very painful. I'll write about that topic later.
Returning to the subject, on the other hand, peer pressure can have a positive aspect.
(To be continued)

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