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제목 | Power of imagination | 등록일 | 2022-04-12 |
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내용 | All human being has imagination. This is a greatest ability that animals do not have. A few days ago, my cute sun asked me that why we live on the earth and what first creature was on our space. Frankly, I couldn’t answer what he wanted. Children have curiosity on everything. They always say “why”. Even though adult can do many things and know lots of things, we don’t give question “why” to ourself. This is a fixed idea(stereotype). Fixed idea prevent thinking more. It important that thinking more can make imagination. Because all we use in society is the result of imagination. |
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담당강사 | Allie1 | 등록일 | 2022-04-13 |
첨삭 내용 | All human being has imagination. This is a greatest ability that animals do not have. This is the great ability that animals do not have. A few days ago, my cute sun [son] asked me that why we live on the earth and what first creature was on our space. Frankly, I couldn’t answer what he wanted. Frankly, I couldn't answer his question. Children have curiosity on everything. Children are always curious on everything. They always say “why”. And they always ask "why". Even though adult can do many things and know lots of things, we don’t give question “why” to ourself. , we don't normally ask ourselves, "why." This is a fixed idea(stereotype). This is a stereotype. Fixed idea prevent thinking more. And such thinking prevents us to think more. It important that thinking more can make imagination. Because all we use in society is the result of imagination.It is important that we imagine, because all we use in our society is a result of our imagination. |