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제목 The effects of peer pressure (end) 등록일 2022-04-13
내용 If I weren’t to move to a company I have been working, I would never have been studying English. Because it was not necessary and no peer pressure in a previous job.

However, my current job is the global company and sometimes I have to communicate global center. That reason my teammate and manager have been pushing me to improve English directly and indirectly.

Because of the pressure from my team, I might have been studying English forcedly, my manager told me that it will be helpful for me someday. I agree with him. It might have been because of the positive peer pressure.
담당강사 Lisa1 등록일 2022-04-14
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If I hadn't moved to the company I am working for, I would never have been studying English, because it was not necessary and there was no pressure to in my previous job.

However, my current job is a global company and sometimes I have to communicate with international people. For that reason, my teammates and manager have been pushing me to improve English directly and indirectly.

Because of the pressure from my team, I might have been studying English forcedly (I'm not sure what you mean here). My manager told me that it would be helpful for me someday. I agree with him, though it might have been because of the positive peer pressure.

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