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| 제목 | The effects on children of a broken marriage (2) | 등록일 | 2022-04-18 |
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| 내용 | It is also known that in the case of divorce due to parental violence, children is likely to show a violent tendency. So, why are these unfortunate things happening? I’ve been thinking of a lot of about its cause. The root case seems to be marriage itself. Also, as for me, I had been resenting my father in teenage, and 20s. But now it is time when I'm best age for marriage, a lot of things have gradually begun to understand. Perhaps parents have lived with the responsibility of the head of the household and the anxiety, fear, regret, and anxiety about becoming an adult. (To be continued) |
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| 담당강사 | Lisa1 | 등록일 | 2022-04-19 |
| 첨삭 내용 | It is also known that in the case of divorce due to parental violence, children are more likely to show violent tendencies. |
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