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제목 | The effects on children of a broken marriage (3) | 등록일 | 2022-04-19 |
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내용 | Rather than a good marriage in which they depend on and support each other more and more through the act of marriage, the divorce shows the aspect of a bad marriage that is forced to continue by nibbling at each other, slandering, swearing, fighting, and voicing negative emotions. Marriage is divided into a good or bad marriage, not only do they love each other, but also depending on whether the partner has a patience to stand alone in the world or not. If you get married someone who don't stand alone, the partner and child will be carried on your back, only one person puts up with marriage. |
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담당강사 | Lisa1 | 등록일 | 2022-04-20 |
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(This is all kind of hard to understand and not very clear.) |