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제목 The effects on children of a broken marriage (4) 등록일 2022-04-21
내용 Another cause is someone who is having an affair with other.
Of course, I believe there is no such thing as eternal love, but I think there is nothing more stupid than losing someone's who I choose trust in.
I have heard someone who is having an affair with other. but I don’t understand theirs act.
When I have heard about an affair, I sometimes think that there is no one to trust.
Just a act of affair that lost someone’s all of trust, the person who has an affair might have been given a divorce petition with a lot of money penalty.
담당강사 Lisa1 등록일 2022-04-22
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Another cause is someone having an affair with other.
Of course, I believe there is no such thing as eternal love, but I think there is nothing more stupid than losing the trust of someone I love. (Is this what you meant?)
I have heard of people who have affairs with others, but I don’t understand their actions.
When I hear about an affair, I sometimes think that nobody can be trusted.
Just a act of affair that lost someone’s all of trust, the person who has an affair might have been given a divorce petition with a lot of money penalty. (I'm not sure what you mean here.)

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