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제목 The effects on children of a broken marriage (5) 등록일 2022-04-21
내용 Because of a legal responsibility on his shoulder later, Do not have an affair. If a adulterer were to put himself in hers shoes, he would never have had an affair.

However, someone who had an affair do not thinking of.

Everything is gone because of just one moment of temptation and affair.

For studying English I used to read about “Dear Abby” website and somebody ask to Abby, and Abby give a advice to somebody. I have read some interesting story about an affair in there.

Not only an affair, but there were many amazing things that.

And I read it, An affair is so bad things.
담당강사 Lisa1 등록일 2022-04-22
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Because of a legal responsibility on his shoulder later, Do not have an affair. If a adulterer were to put himself in hers shoes, he would never have had an affair. (This is hard to understand, I'm not sure what you mean.)

However, someone who has an affair did not think of that.

Everything is gone because of just one moment of temptation.

For studying English, I used to read the “Dear Abby” website, where people ask questions to Abby, and Abby gives advice to them. I have read some interesting stories about affairs in there. (I am assuming you mean more than one story.)

Not only an affair, but there were many amazing things that. (This does not seem like a complete sentence, so I'm not sure what you mean.)

And I read it, An affair is so bad things. (This is also unclear.)

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