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제목 The effects on children of a broken marriage (end) 등록일 2022-04-25
내용 In conclusion, a broken marriage has a huge negative effect on children.
It is likely to lead a bad result that a divorce in the future when the child will come to get married with someone else later.
Also, children will act like children's parents they have seen.
Parents shouldn't be yelling and fighting in front of children.
The apple doesn't fall far from the tree. Parents are the mirror of their children.
Parents have basic child support obligation to care their children well.
In my opinion, therefore, in order to protect children's future, parents have enough time to sleep on a divorce.
담당강사 Lisa1 등록일 2022-04-26
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In conclusion, a broken marriage has a huge negative effect on children.
It is likely to lead a bad result that a divorce in the future when the child will come to get married with someone else later. (I'm not sure what you mean here.)
Also, children tend to behave as they have seen their parents behave.
Parents shouldn't be yelling and fighting in front of children.
The apple doesn't fall far from the tree. Children are the mirror of their parents.
Parents have the basic obligation to care for their children well.
In my opinion, therefore, in order to protect the future of children, parents have enough time to sleep on a divorce. (I'm not sure what you mean here.)

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